I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
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Thursday, April 16, 2020
The Robot story part
Today I did a google drawing about a robot story we had to read a part of the book then we made a picture about that part of the story.
I enjoyed making this picture about a part of a story.
Whats your favourite story to read?
This is a great drawing of your visual image from the text. I like how you added sound words to your drawing for greater impact. Could you add into your drawing the Robot that is being hit by the lightning?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Livia,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great drawing of your visual image from the text. I like how you added sound words to your drawing for greater impact.
Could you add into your drawing the Robot that is being hit by the lightning?