I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I like your food list for visiting Nainoa. Good to see a couple of healthy things on your list like "Dry apricots" and "Astronaut raspberries" (I'm not even sure what Astronaut raspberries are but they sound pretty awesome). It looks like you've thought about food that will last the journey without a fridge too. I think all your choices would last for a long time.
Well done for completing this SLJ activity, looking forward to seeing more. Daniel :)
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Hey Livia,
ReplyDeleteI like your food list for visiting Nainoa. Good to see a couple of healthy things on your list like "Dry apricots" and "Astronaut raspberries" (I'm not even sure what Astronaut raspberries are but they sound pretty awesome). It looks like you've thought about food that will last the journey without a fridge too. I think all your choices would last for a long time.
Well done for completing this SLJ activity, looking forward to seeing more.
Daniel :)