This week for writing are writing had to be about if we should open or shut are borders.
Opening statement:
Sequence of points: (Firstly, secondly, thirdly, lastly)
Concluding statement:
Facts and opinions:
Should New Zealand open their borders?
New Zealand was Covid free again until August. Should we open are borders if there is Covid in the country?. We have got many cases in the past days for example 83,82 and 75 and they all are increasing very fast. How we got all of these cases was because of the delta variant we are in lock down for another two weeks and what deltas are made of is sediment. Firstly,the case that got all of us in lock down was from Australia when we opened our borders to them, but we should have stayed closed until their cases got lower but we decided to open them. Secondly, the people who came over from Australia should have gotten a Covid test before they went on the plane so no Covid would be on the plane. Thirdly,if they did not have a Covid test then it would be hard to notice if someone had Covid. Lastly, we should learn from our mistakes of opening are borders to Australia.
