I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
This is a great drawing of your visual image from the text. I like how you added sound words to your drawing for greater impact. Could you add into your drawing the Robot that is being hit by the lightning?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Livia,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great drawing of your visual image from the text. I like how you added sound words to your drawing for greater impact.
Could you add into your drawing the Robot that is being hit by the lightning?