I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I like how you have used descriptive language in your poem to make it easy to imagine the light! I really liked the line bounces off my bike into my eyes! This is so true and can be both annoying at the time but beautiful to think about later.
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Hi Livia,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used descriptive language in your poem to make it easy to imagine the light! I really liked the line bounces off my bike into my eyes! This is so true and can be both annoying at the time but beautiful to think about later.