I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Livia I really like your animation it looks very cool just a thought maybe you could add more slides when the person goes underwater so we can know what happens.!
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Hi Livia I really like your animation it looks very cool
ReplyDeletejust a thought maybe you could add more slides when the person goes underwater so we can know what happens.!