This week for writing I did a 2 or 3 second recount, It was a picture of a man running on a race.
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There I was , running with all my power trying to get that win. All those years I trained to e in this race, even if my legs don't work I can still can be in this race. My feeling is always turning off and on, I'm scared to disappoint the whole audience. My heart is racing fast like a tiger, who knows what will happen next. But I was getting hotter and hotter by the storming sun. I will try to win no matter what, and if I don't win I can try next time.
I enjoyed describing a 2 or 3 second recount.
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