I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Livia, You have worked so hard to find out all of this information about your soldier! He sounds like he was an amazing man and how cool that he was a teacher too.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Livia,
ReplyDeleteYou have worked so hard to find out all of this information about your soldier! He sounds like he was an amazing man and how cool that he was a teacher too.