I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Livia, I can see you have put all the steps in order for a yummy sandwich. Do you think I might need some written down instructions to help me get everything right. Can I spread the butter with my fingers?? Do I put a put all of that cheese on my bread... that would make the sandwich a bit fat, don't you think??? Keep up the good learning.
Hi Livia, This looks like the start of a delicious sandwich. Could you write out the instructions step by step to explain to the reader how they create your sandwich? Have a think about each step that you need to take and in what order you need to complete them. I look forwards to reading your written instructions when you are finished.
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Hi Livia,
ReplyDeleteI can see you have put all the steps in order for a yummy sandwich. Do you think I might need some written down instructions to help me get everything right. Can I spread the butter with my fingers?? Do I put a put all of that cheese on my bread... that would make the sandwich a bit fat, don't you think??? Keep up the good learning.
Hi Livia,
ReplyDeleteThis looks like the start of a delicious sandwich. Could you write out the instructions step by step to explain to the reader how they create your sandwich? Have a think about each step that you need to take and in what order you need to complete them. I look forwards to reading your written instructions when you are finished.