I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Livia, You make a very good point. It is very important to state the ingredients on packaging as there are a lot of people who have allergies. Do you think that you could add some more details into the middle part of your opinion piece as to why we need packaging?
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Hi Livia,
ReplyDeleteYou make a very good point. It is very important to state the ingredients on packaging as there are a lot of people who have allergies. Do you think that you could add some more details into the middle part of your opinion piece as to why we need packaging?
Hello Livia,
ReplyDeleteI agree
a lot of people have allergies to food
and the food would get all mouldy and dirty.