This week I did a space writing that is about a new planet.
"hurry up i have some special news called mum from the living room "what is it " I got you a surprise I smiled in joy "what is it? open it up said mum in a big smile I rushed open it it was wrapping paper all over the floor "slow down " said Mum " a telescope " thank you so much I said in a big smile. after dinner i went outside to try out my telescope i look into the telescope and saw lots of stars "wow" as i was in shock, "Livia time for bed " mum said "coming mum " i packed up my telescope and got into my pyjamas. The next day I told all my friends about my telescope. They all came for a sleep over and we played space games, when it turned dark i got my telescope out and all my friends came rushing out the door to try out my telescope "me " "no me" they were fighting over the telescope, "clam down i will go first" I looked though the telescope "I found a new planet" really all my friends said in shock "my dad work at NASA and that is not true" one of my friends said angrily "then look" I shouted she looked in the telescope angry "wow" there is a willy mammoth "told you" I said angrily "you win" she said I will get my dad to let us ride the rocket. A couple days later I went with my friend to find that planet we got there and we entered the place. Blast off! we were going up to space i saw the planet in the distance. We got to the planet it had a lot of willy mammoths and other extinct animals.
I enjoyed writing my space story of finding a new planet.
Do you like space?
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