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Friday, November 12, 2021

My rainbow kiwi

 This week for writing we had to make a monster with any tools and make are monster go on a adventure.



The perfect kiwi 


So there I was, at the zoo picking an animal to take home, when I saw the perfect pet with the most unique pattern. It was a rainbow kiwi with wings as big as a falcons and a stinger to sting prey, but most of all was its fur soft and fluffy head. After telling my dad that it was the one I wanted I was allowed to take him home, and my dad was setting up the cage for my new pet. That night, I got into bed and placed my kiwi in it’s cage after playing with it. 


The very next day, I decided to take my kiwi for a little walk. I was carrying him when all of a sudden he jumped, and flew into a tree. My dad tried to grab my kiwi but missed him. I ran to the tree to try get him but the tree was huge and my kiwi kept going higher and higher. My dad came running behind and was shocked and shouted “We have to call the firefighters”. My dad got his phone and rang the fire station. I ran home to get food to try and get my kiwi down from the high tree. I was running back when all of a sudden my kiwi flew to the next tree. I was running to the next tree when a person walking on the path got stung by my kiwi and he flew away up into the sky. My kiwi decided to fly over the lake and build a burrow in a tree to hide. The firefighters came but my dad had to say what happened, when the firefighters left I told my dad that my kiwi flew to the other side. “Really? We better go there” said my dad we ran there as quickly as we could. 


After walking and walking we found him in a little burrow tucked up. “We should let him go” my dad said, “I guess so” I replied about to cry. Nowadays we check on him and give him food often. He always comes over to say hi or fly above us so we know he is about.            

I enjoyed writing about my monster
If you had a monster what would it be?

1 comment:

  1. This was a really nice story Livia. I like how you described the kiwi's fur as soft and fluffy. It was nice that even though the kiwi flew away from your, he still comes to say hello.

    Next time, make sure you include your N.L and R.T at the beginning of your writing.

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