I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nice work this week Livia. I enjoyed looking at the timeline you had created for Vincent Van Gogh, and I especially like how you included a photo as well. I like the mural you had created for the STEAM art project. It was great that you explained why you had chosen certain things to include in your mural. Next time, maybe you could have included where you would have your mural painted in Papakura.
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Nice work this week Livia. I enjoyed looking at the timeline you had created for Vincent Van Gogh, and I especially like how you included a photo as well.
ReplyDeleteI like the mural you had created for the STEAM art project. It was great that you explained why you had chosen certain things to include in your mural. Next time, maybe you could have included where you would have your mural painted in Papakura.