I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi This is really funny and I lie how you used Isabella as the face. Maybe so that you can read it better you could change the color of the writing so it is easier to read?
I do not agree to this I'm not the queen of mermaids and this is definitely fake! anyways I agree with Leslie that you could have made the text colour different so it is easy-to-read.
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Hi This is really funny and I lie how you used Isabella as the face. Maybe so that you can read it better you could change the color of the writing so it is easier to read?
ReplyDeletehi thats is funny
ReplyDeleteI do not agree to this
ReplyDeleteI'm not the queen of mermaids
and this is definitely fake!
anyways I agree with Leslie that you could have
made the text colour different so it is easy-to-read.