I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Livia, great work on completing your tasks. I like the DLO you made about your issue and that you made this a quality blog post. I suggest maybe next time only include the texts you did read from the "read: slide and delete the others. We only need to know which texts you did read.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Livia, great work on completing your tasks. I like the DLO you made about your issue and that you made this a quality blog post. I suggest maybe next time only include the texts you did read from the "read: slide and delete the others. We only need to know which texts you did read.
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