This week for writing we had to write a letter to Auckland council.
Address: 23 Ray Small Drive
Date: 21 October
Auckland Council
Dear, Auckland Council
Hello, Auckland Council. I want to talk about Pahurehure inlet and what you can do to change what is going on there. Firstly, more rubbish bins need to be added to the inlet, because you can see rubbish on the side of the road and paths. Another thing is that if you add railing to the side on the path then people won’t fall off. I also think if you add more native trees we can have more native birds around the area, who can build nests and have homes. Also if you pull out the mangroves we can see the inlet more clearly. Lastly, if you add more pest traps then dogs and other pets or birds don’t get hurt or harmed. That's all that I think you should change or add to Pahurehure inlet to stop what is going on there.
Your Sincerely
From Livia,
I enjoyed writing a letter to Auckland council.
What do you like about Pahurehure?
Hi Livia, this is a great letter to the Auckland Council. I like how you included the ideas you think will improve the inlet such as adding more rubbish bins and planting more native trees. Next time, I think you could separate the letter into paragraphs so it is easier to read.
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