This week for writing I had to do a steam project about what we can change about Pahurehure.
How my project can help Pahurehure
Hello, this is why my project can help Pahurehure inlet and what is going on there. My project is about what we can fix to stop the pollution.
Firstly, if we add rubbish bins we can stop people throwing rubbish on the side of the path or the road. Secondly, if we add native trees we can have native birds that can get food or make nests, so that they don't starve or don’t have a home. Thirdly, if we add railings then people won’t fall off and it is much safer. Lastly,having pest traps can stop dogs or pets from getting hurt. Another thing is pulling out mangroves because fish can have more room to swim and don’t get stuck in a mangrove.
So that is how my project can stop what is happening in Pahurehure.
Nice work Livia. I am glad to see you have written an explanation text even though we have not covered this in class. You have started off explaining WHY your project will improve the inlet. Next time, you can try and write more detail about why your project will help. For example, why do rubbish bins help stop rubbishing being thrown on the ground? This might require you to do some research.
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