I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nice work Livia, I really enjoyed watching your video about your Rainbow kiwi mini beast. You have done an awesome job creating it on minecraft and I can see all the hard work you put into it!
I also really enjoyed watching your create documentary. I think it was a great idea that you completed this with a friend and we got to see all the work you both did.
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Nice work Livia, I really enjoyed watching your video about your Rainbow kiwi mini beast. You have done an awesome job creating it on minecraft and I can see all the hard work you put into it!
ReplyDeleteI also really enjoyed watching your create documentary. I think it was a great idea that you completed this with a friend and we got to see all the work you both did.
Hi Livia ,My name is Sofia ,interesting mini best you designed this week and I like the colours you used for it.
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where does it live?
Hi Livia this is Holly. I really like your mini beast you created was a very creative idea and the documentary you made was also very cool. Great job!
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