I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nice work this week. I like the DLO you made about a balanced diet which included the food pyramid. I think next time you could have made it bigger so we can read the writing easier. I also lie the food pyramid you made and that you included a photo to represent each the food groups.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Livia,
ReplyDeleteNice work this week. I like the DLO you made about a balanced diet which included the food pyramid. I think next time you could have made it bigger so we can read the writing easier. I also lie the food pyramid you made and that you included a photo to represent each the food groups.