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Friday, September 24, 2021

The day I woke up with super powers

 This week for writing the topic was about If I woke up with super powers

Plan:                         

N.L to narrate

R.T: Include characters

One morning it was the weirdest day of my life. I woke up and looked at the time “what time is it?'' I  said. I looked at my alarm “Eight a clock!” I said in shock. Now I am in a hurry. I am going to be late for school and it was a school day. I wished I could stop everything in a flash or just teleport. In a flash I saw everything stopped. I never knew that I could stop time like that. I walked to the kitchen and mum was there. “ Good morning honey” My mum said with a smile. “Morning mum” I said. I ate my breakfast at the table and left in a flash. While I was walking I tried to stop time “abracadabra”I said as I saw if it worked. Nothing happened and I had to run all the way to school. 

I was able to get to school just in time and not be late, but I was wondering why I had powers and how to control them.   At lunch I told my friends about how I woke up and how I felt when I stopped time but they just laughed and didn’t believe me. That very next day I felt like no one would believe me, I didn't know whose powers these might be or if they were mine. I wanted to tell my mum but I had to keep this power a secret. It was the weekend and I had a party at Jump. I needed to try to see if I had more powers that might be useful. At the party I could hear voices in my head when I talked to someone, like it could be that I was a bad friend or they hated me. After the party I was in my bed writing about my powers. “So I have to mind reading I think and stopping time” I said to myself. I had to tell my mum “ Hi honey what is it” My mum said. “ Um I might have two powers,” I said. “What?” My mum shouted,  “you should not be here, I don't want you in my house” she said in anger.  “Wait” I said, “I said leave this house go pack now” she shouted at the top of her lungs. I had to stay at my friend's house that night. That night I felt scared and sad I didn’t know what to do. The next day I saw a poster on the supermarket window and I started reading “If you have super powers come behind the supermarket”. 

I went behind the supermarket that day and I saw two kids that looked the same age as me and asked “Is this where the poster said?” I asked “ Yes” one of the kids said “ By the way my name is Louis” one of the kids “ and I am Sage” the other one said “ Hi you two I am Livia” I said. After a couple hours talking I asked what their super powers were and Louis had Super speed and strength and Sage had teleportation and could turn invisible. We said to meet at the park that next day. At the park we started getting to know each other and starting to get close. Years went by and we have continued to work together as a superhero team.

I enjoyed writing about me with super powers.

How would you feel if you had super powers?

1 comment:

  1. Nice work this week with your writing Livia. You have done a great job of including paragraphs to separate your story so it is easier to read. I like how your character was able to meet other kids who also had superpowers and they became a team. Keep up the great work.

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