I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea and my teachers are Whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I like the flip book you made about Wonder Woman, maybe next time you can practice flipping the pages faster! I can see that you have a good understanding of 1st and 3rd person when writing a narrative.
Next time delete the math pages you do not complete.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Nice work Livia,
ReplyDeleteI like the flip book you made about Wonder Woman, maybe next time you can practice flipping the pages faster!
I can see that you have a good understanding of 1st and 3rd person when writing a narrative.
Next time delete the math pages you do not complete.